Kia ora Helena, that ice cream does look yummy. Perfect for a hot summer day.
The commenting team will also be looking for a chorus that you have written. Use the template again and try and write your own chorus.
You could choose a summer theme or just a topic that is important to you. You can edit this post and upload your chorus above Justin's so you have both.
Let me know in the comments when you have updated and I will check back.
Kia ora Helena, that ice cream does look yummy. Perfect for a hot summer day.
ReplyDeleteThe commenting team will also be looking for a chorus that you have written. Use the template again and try and write your own chorus.
You could choose a summer theme or just a topic that is important to you. You can edit this post and upload your chorus above Justin's so you have both.
Let me know in the comments when you have updated and I will check back.
from Mrs Grant
Thank you Mrs. Grant, I have updated the post.
ReplyDeleteThat's awesome Helena, very clever how you rhymed with hieroglyphic!
ReplyDeleteI read your chorus out loud a couple of times and it does sound great.
If you decide to Step it up and record yourself reading your lyrics add them to your blog post too.
Well done,
Mrs Grant
Thank you Mrs. Grant, I'm not sure about stepping it up part, I might try it.
ReplyDeleteThan would be great Helena, you can record yourself using Screencastify.
ReplyDeleteClick here to see how to do this.
You could also take a look at Kayla @ Ohaeawai School for ideas. There is a link to her video at the end of her blog post.
Let me know if this is helpful
Mrs Grant