There men on the moon once
They travelled through space
And found that the moon
Was a dry dusty space.
They collected some moon rocks
And had to look around
They left lots of footprints
There on the ground.
They couldn’t stay long
As the moon has no air
But the footprints they left
In the dust are still there.
Kia ora again Helena,
ReplyDeleteNice to have you blogging again! I really loved how this time you added pictures. Don't forget to attribute your images. This is when you say where you got your photos from. Here is the link if you don't know how. We give out full marks when you attribute your photos! https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit#slide=id.g2c4e689b11_0_0
WOW! I love the poem you have created, it is very clever. My favourite part of your poem was
‘They couldn’t stay long
As the moon has no air
But the footprints they left
In the dust are still there’.
Did you find it easy to write this poem? Next time you should try to use Google Slides to create your blog post, it is super fun to use.
I’m really looking forward to more of your blog posts, keep up the awesome work!
Cheers,
Georgia
It wasn't really that easy to come up with rhyming words so I ended up telling the story.
ReplyDeleteAwesome work :) Thanks for commenting back!
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