Thanks for sharing that information about Serena Williams, she is a pretty incredible human isn’t she?! I also like how you’ve presented your ideas on a slideshow with images, it makes your post more creative and eye-catching.
Unfortunately I can only give you half points for this activity though because it needs to be written in your own words. Remember that anything you post online must be put into your own words. In order to receive full points for this activity, could you please re-read the activity and create a blog post using your own words.
You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new one with the updated activity. Please let us know in the comments below once you have done this, so we can check it out and award you the full points.
I look forward to reading your edited post Helena, Eliza :)
Good afternoon Helena,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing that information about Serena Williams, she is a pretty incredible human isn’t she?! I also like how you’ve presented your ideas on a slideshow with images, it makes your post more creative and eye-catching.
Unfortunately I can only give you half points for this activity though because it needs to be written in your own words. Remember that anything you post online must be put into your own words. In order to receive full points for this activity, could you please re-read the activity and create a blog post using your own words.
You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new one with the updated activity. Please let us know in the comments below once you have done this, so we can check it out and award you the full points.
I look forward to reading your edited post Helena,
Eliza :)
I have updated my blog post. Thank you
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