Jack and the rat
One time there was a rat who lived in a clock.
The rat went to the kitchen and grabbed the
cheese and tried to get back upon the clock.
Soon a giant boy came and said ‘im Jack’.
So the boy nearly got the rat but that rat
jumped on the boys foot the boy started to
scream. Then the boy went to his parents
saying mum dad there is a rat on my foot.
The dad went and threw it on the grass. The
rat saw the window open so the rat went
inside ‘finally i can climb’ so the rat went to
the clock and climbed it.
Description: the rat was gray,pink tail,black
eyes.
Jack: brown eyes,golden brown hair.
Hi Helena I really like the story Jack and the rat it was interesting because you used langauge fetures juring the story. well done
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